Cultivating the Universe (Dropped This one [Started and going to continue the Re-Written Version])

The Universe is vast and the closest existence to be being infinite. A being Controls the Universe. He chooses many souls and makes them reincarnate in different worlds. This is the story of the favorite soul of the being.(Temporary Description).         Hi guys. This is my first story that I am writing and I am a complete beginner at it.I am gonna take some ideas from other novels and fan fictions.   It isn't necessary to read the previous version of the Novel as this version goes on a complete different route than the previous one So any advices about my fan fiction are appreciated and I hope you guys could help me. I will try to reply to as many comments as I can.