Drops

Kidnapped from his country home as a child and raised by powerful government authorities, a young man born with unusual abilities poses a serious threat to valuable water resources on his homeland, causing everything to crash and burn. It’s not until a blossoming friendship is born after years of isolation that he must do everything he can to protect those who he has betrayed, and face his complicated past as dangerous circumstances rise in war torn Plod.  ————————— Note: This is the first book of a series. This fiction is rated R. Violence, profanity, trauma, suicide, mental illness, sexual content, and disturbing elements are prevalent. Gore is described in graphic detail that may be disturbing. Please keep in mind that some later chapters may be deleted and rewritten for improvement, as this is a continuous work in progress and I aim to focus on quality over quantity.  As a writer, I strongly believe I have a certain responsibility to uphold to my audience. In no way do I ever intend to explore these very serious topics for the sake of shock value or exploitation (to do so would be unethical)—but to merely examine the effects of war on the human psyche in a third world country. The story is very, very depressing. Do not read if you are sensitive with heavy subject matter, including themes of suicide. It is a tragedy, which means that it has dark and disturbing psychological content that is intended for a mature audience. Do not read the whole thing in one sitting, as it may be emotionally draining. Read in small sections. Do not read if you like happy, light novels. Read at your own risk. Haitian Creole and Jamaican Patois will be sprinkled in rarely from time to time.   The opinions and thoughts of the characters are not mine. If you are sensitive to traumatic content, please do not read. Do not read if you are sensitive to mental illness, genocide, graphic violence, or the reality of war.  I ask that while you critique this story, you do it in a respectful way. If anyone harrasses me/ tries to discourage me from writing, they will be reported.  All feedback, critique and suggestions are welcome; feel free to comment. I am trying to grow and improve my writing, so constructive criticism behind advanced negative reviews are appreciated. Due to the fact that I am a graduate student and working full time, some chapters may come a little later than usual.  I am also interested in any ideas people may have for the drafting process. In other words, if you want to tear apart my story, do it properly, please. Negative reviews that respectfully point out any plot holes, inconsistencies with my characters, or writing style are well appreciated. Anyone attacking me personally will be reported and blocked, especially as the fiction gets longer. I do not need negativity or harassment. For those who take the time out of their day to read and offer helpful feedback, I truly appreciate you all, and you are the best. You have been warned. Read at your own risk.  Thank you.