Falling in Love with The First King - Draft

He saw the title and read it outloud “The First King”? Then he turned it around to read the summary. The text made his heart beat faster. This sounded so interesting! The summary told of a world where the strong survive and powerful thrive, filled with pillage, murder, drama, castles and dinosaurs. How fricking cool is that!? This makes one's blood boil with ambition and excitement! And it’s all in a medieval setting. But the book's ending was rotten... William took his anger out on the book but was paid back tenfold. When he realized it, it was too late: "What!? I'm reborn as a girl in this crazy world!? Book! You really want to see me suffer don't you!?". Warning: Contains mentions of rape, family abuse and cruel scenes... The version currently available is a first draft of the story. It has been left kinda incomplete. But if you do read it, please tell me what you thought about it in the comments. As it may help me improve the final version. ｡(*^▽^*)ゞ